All Comments on 'Cliché Comes True'

When she gets back from shopping...

Nothing better than a good story well told.

Perfect line!

Especially as my partner was starkers and sitting naked on the table amidst the carnage of cards and chips and his discarded clothes when he read me the story.

I'm assuming you put breaks in between the POV shifts...?

Doesn't matter as much when it's being read TO you, but it's a shame the breaks aren't more clear for the readers

Sequel please....