All Comments on 'Cliffhanger'

That's the best last line ever! LOL Loved this, Sirhugs. Especially the farmer's daughters and the swarthy friend at the beginning. *chuckle* Poor Barry. :)

good luck in the contest.

Very good story. I enjoy your writing style.

Very imaginative. Maybe a tad slow in the beginning but the ending was original and well-done. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

A nice read there sirhugs. I loved the beginning. . .Ahhh the memories of being a farmer's daughter, well... mine weren't that good. lol. . .I liked the end too. I wasn't expecting it. Great twists. ~ Red.

Interesting, convoluted tale, possibly too many characters, but an enjoyable read none the less.

fun to read...

I loved what you did with this tale, Sirhugs! "Cliffhanger" is a wonderfully clever title for it. The backpacking flashback was a fun little twist in the beginning to get a feel for the kind of guy Barry was.

:)

And, of course, your description of sex is delicious!

Another review is on its way! ;)

Fantastic read, what a super plot what a great ending and so well paced throughout the whole thing, brilliant.

That's it? He died?