All Comments on 'Climbing Ayers Rock - Uluru'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Sensitive and Believable

Great Job; excellent writing and a fresh theme.

Ken NitsuaKen Nitsuaover 17 years ago
Needs polishing, but good job

Grammar and punctuation (especially of dialogue) are frequently wayward, but the simultaneous feelings of lust and guilt when being unfaithful to a longtime partner are caught with vivid clarity. I'm hanging with you and hope you'll work on polishing your writing--you have talent. Best, Ken

MeniwannafukMeniwannafukalmost 6 years ago
Disrespectful

I don't know what year this story was written...

It is so disrespectful to the Aboriginal peoples of Uluru to climb it

Please if you ever visit please do not climb it

It is a sacred monument

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