All Comments on 'Climbing The Corporate Ladder Ch. 01'

2nd effort not needed nor desired.

2 star effort maybe 1&1/2

Good and real life story

i'm looking forward to how you... ahem... flesh it out

keep the story coming, and ignore the naysayers... they don't have to read it.

RA

Don't bother to finish it.

With a little fleshing out of the story and a little proof reading you have the beginning of a decent story. Remember the the story is yours to tell, everyone else can do what they will.

Polish and continue.

Great job! Just have a little more editing next time, and the complaints from those idiots will stop. I'm hoping for a next chapter!

my 1 star in the ring

:)

Whilst I love the concept of stopping his fucked up “work ethic” and hunting tactics it doesn’t make any sense to record the entire thing to blackmail him, because she gave verbal consent. That negates any attempt to prove that it was unwanted sexual advances.

I think you’d benefit from an editor/ proof reader or at the very least reading it aloud to yourself before submitting it.

Thank you for sharing, best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)