by KegRoller
Brittany should make Holly Darius new fucktoy and getting a double dose of the salve from a willing doctor who will join in the scheme to turn Holly into a more willing submissive slut for BBC. As sweet revenge Holly will do all the chores for Darius as he lays comfortable on the couch. Result, getting rid of a bitch.
not very much detail and seduction in this chapter, I still read it all tho.
This series is well written but chapter one stands out; it totally pulled me into the story. I wanted to comment on it specifically because it was so very effective. There was tension, intrigue and I couldn't wait to discover what happened next. So many possibilities (as you mentioned)! For fun, I'd like to see you try another plot direction. You weave an engaging story.