All Comments on 'Clinical Trials Ch. 02'

by KegRoller

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Make Holly Darius' fucktoy

Brittany should make Holly Darius new fucktoy and getting a double dose of the salve from a willing doctor who will join in the scheme to turn Holly into a more willing submissive slut for BBC. As sweet revenge Holly will do all the chores for Darius as he lays comfortable on the couch. Result, getting rid of a bitch.

liz33ndliz33ndover 6 years ago
good writing

not very much detail and seduction in this chapter, I still read it all tho.

CdJenniferHCdJenniferHalmost 5 years ago
More please

So good, I've got to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Chapter one stands out

This series is well written but chapter one stands out; it totally pulled me into the story. I wanted to comment on it specifically because it was so very effective. There was tension, intrigue and I couldn't wait to discover what happened next. So many possibilities (as you mentioned)! For fun, I'd like to see you try another plot direction. You weave an engaging story.

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