All Comments on 'Clinical Trials Ch. 09'

Anticlimatic drivel.

bring in the BBC. That's the only thing that can satisfy her and your racist mind.

Careful What She Needs! Darnus Has Her Forever! Great Series! What Happened To The Doc? To Holly?

Would have liked to seen Brittney get some revenge on Holly at least for a short while.

I loved where this story was going but this chapter was awful.

It is pretty good ending I like it. Yes I'd like to some revenge. But even this mild revenge is good. Britney is kind person. And somehow it looks she enjoyed denial and teasing to some extent. So I hope Darnus and she would find good time together and she would deal with her problem.

An excellent story from start to finish. Great pacing and character development.

I would like to see something of what Billy puts Holly through, bringing her down a notch or three. And there's certainly room for more adventures with Brit.

Overall, top notch stuff.

For me the scene in strip club was too brutal, and real person wouldn't release holly so fast, more likely she would torture her for a week or something for revenge.

As for giving holly to her boyfriend, she should stay there and watch the begining of training as tutor :)

Also she could ask Darnus to find a programer that could add complete turn off option for nanos.

so far fetched, its hot and erotic and sexy and , well you get the point.

Thought it was a great story. You set the stage and the pace perfectly, and I really liked the unintended consequences you wove into it. I'd love to see what happens next!

Would have like to read about Holly using her leverage with Dr. Drake to get Brittiany a huge stripper set of tits, double EE, in an effort to use Brit as a money making machine; stripping and whoring. The rest of the ending was OK. Maybe Brit ending up with the BBC but not able to leave her new found slut ways.

Love the series. Thanks for writing

Continue the story please