All Comments on 'Clique Ch. 01'

Nice Illustrations!

But I liked your main character's "voice." I was expecting more sex, not just a tease, because she appears to be "hot."

Keep writing.

Though this must be a pretty small school 'cause the group seems a bit too disparate for a clique.

Yes, it's a set up. :) Don't worry, things will progress. I like a slow burn. Thanks for the comments!

Maybe I should have given a warning at the beginning about no sex yet. People are retaliating with 3's, ha ha. Chapters 2 and 3 are submitted and pending, I hope you'll see them soon.

Now we are ready to explore this little clique??

Neither too wordy nor too superfluous....

Go for GOLD, PS!!

Nice opener, PencilSketch,

I'm with you. I kind of like a slow burn, too. Especially when I'm doing the writing. But, like you said, I'm noticing that one does get paid back with lower ratings that way. :-)