All Comments on 'Closer Ch. 02'

Boy how unexpected was that!. Love this story.

Please keep writing, you are a talent.

What a cliff hanger!! Looking forward to reading more chapters soon. Very well written. Characters are three dimensional and you can feel their emotions. Please post next chapter soon.

What an amazing difference from your first submission. The first was good, but this was great! I was left with nothing to say..i totally didnt expect that ending. YOU GO GIRL! you rocked this story...cant wait for the next chapter. You gave us length and lots of depth-wonderful! Ty for a great story

good start,sex came kinda fast in the story, but they have been friends for along time, Interesting to see where this will go.

good story, hurry with chapter 3

What a way to end that chapter. Looking forward to the next one. I really want to see how Justin make up for this and what's going to happen before and after they graduate. Great work. Loved it!!!

Where is the fire hose? The sex scenes were explosive and passionate. I can't wait to read more. Keep this story coming.

So, Kim's not a drunken slut after all.

Thanks for a great read. These two are something else. To bad she is going to the prom with an idiot. And her new lover best friend is a fool, the ass. But thanks for a great read and I can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks

I am so loving this story. Mackenzie has way too much time on her hands to be plotting that hard for a boy who doesn't want her. But what's even sadder is that I have known people like that. Wow!! I love Justin and Kim...so good!

She was right about not breaking her date, and Justin is a a-hole, but I like him losing points for making her walk home, but I get it the friendship precedes the loving but if he was protective of her, I would think he would see her home pissed or not. Just a thought.

omg u have to so write a sequel, i want to kno what happens next very very good thanks

Totally need chapter 3 asap!! Thank you for writing it. My favorite part is when Justin goes: "Yeah and a few minutes you were all over mine. Now get out!" I was like, NO HE DIDN'T! But I'm not going to lie...after sex like that, I would've BEEN going to the prom with Justin!

omg this is a really good story plz... make this a long series i loved the ending of this chapter. im looking forward to more =)

obtained, now egos come into play and their friendship is strained again!!!

Looking forward to revenge sex or date rape drugs again...