All Comments on 'Closing The Deal Ch. 02'

This keeps getting hotter and hotter. More chapters would be nice.

My wife and I would love to fuck you. Great writing!

It's always good to read about daughters getting fucked by their fathers, especially when the father shoots cum into his daughter's cunt. Keep it up.

What other action took place during the island getaway?

Very formulaic now with everyone just a trio of sluts who by the way are related. There was a chance to redeem them by now with some hint of character development too bad - you seem like one of the better writers. I just don't care for these three people. I'll try some of your other submissions.

What happened to the DEAL? Did Stacey And Cheryl Get in the magazine? What did Cheryl give Stacey for helping land the contract? Hope to read more!

Mmmm...Hot!

I loved the two chapters. Too bad the author stopped writing 8 years ago so we'll probably never see how the vacation ends.