All Comments on 'Closing Time'

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Chimney SweepChimney Sweepover 14 years ago
Hot in the cold

I've made out in a walk-in before - I wouldn't have lasted that long. :) I don't usually read lesbian scenes but I enjoyed this one greatly. You do good work.

quitequiteover 14 years agoAuthor
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I don't know if anyone else noticed, I just did and I wrote the damn thing, but our manager's name changed between Holly and Wendy. Just noticed. haha.

XactoXactoalmost 3 years ago

I had a hard time keeping the characters clear in my mind. But I suppose that’s one of the risks with a threesome. Nice story! ❤️

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