by halfsummer
Excellent A joy to read a Lit. story with spelling, grammar, & puntuation intact. The icing is the story development & realistic dialog. Looking forward to more from you.
This was a little more vanilla then I usually like (ice cream joke) but it was very well written. Overall a very solid story and I hope too see more
That was cute. I liked her doctor who shirt. A little too mary sue for my taste, but enjoyable nonetheless.