All Comments on 'Closing Up Early'

by halfsummer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Fantastic ! Hope you have another chapter.

ArshanArshanover 11 years ago
A pleasure to read

Excellent A joy to read a Lit. story with spelling, grammar, & puntuation intact. The icing is the story development & realistic dialog. Looking forward to more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
good story

This was a little more vanilla then I usually like (ice cream joke) but it was very well written. Overall a very solid story and I hope too see more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

That was cute. I liked her doctor who shirt. A little too mary sue for my taste, but enjoyable nonetheless.

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