All Comments on 'Cloudberry Chronicles Pt. 03'

Love the description of the Drow Queen, and I learned a new word: Vespertine.

I'm no editor, but if I had one suggestion I would say to expand your description of the now-not-frozen island at the end; it's a massive, sudden change to Cloudberry, and she would probably be freaking out a little bit (ie taking in her surroundings). Is the grass already growing as if it were springtime? Are the waters a tropical blue, or darker like in the north? 5* either way.

@WhimsicalRepertoire Thank you so much, that's a great suggestion! I'm very grateful for all of your feedback so far. :)

Still a great story. Keep it up ☝