by CaptBionic
I missed this story. Please continue in less time than before. This is one of my favourite series ever.
I have to say I've been a bit peeved to have waited for this chapter. Liked it a lot btw.
He can now have his cake and eat it too. But what if he wants pie instead or both at the same time. Plan 2 get Becca and Chad together then live happily ever after with Danni if thats what he wants
I discovered this story for the first time today and read chapters 2 through 6 in one sitting. For me, this story took two everyday, normal people (with well-developed libidos) from chance encounter to friendship/lust simultaneously, to culminate in a healthy, adult love. Don't fuck with it. You're an excellent writer, so please begin another tale.
Thanks for the feedback, I am honored that all of you found the story worth the wait. I believe this is it for this story arc. When I've got a good idea I can work with, I will start with a new set of characters. Thanks for the support.
Bionic
had been following the CNG tale for a while now.
really loved the fact that these were everyday plausible people. good content, delightful sarcasm at times.
and it should end this way. with a new beginning not fully fleshed out. like in real life.
great job. worth the (long) wait.
this was great, I would like to hear more about them later on. It was one of the stories i have been trying to check on.
I added you to my favorites. Can't wait for more from you.
You are an excellent writer and this was a very good story line.
Hey I enjoyed your story! You write well and are funny(in a good way), you can't just leave us hanging like that. What happens next...what about Becca? Does Chad the IT guy hook up with Becca. Will Phil and Danni go on vacation?? I'd say your not done yet... sports1
what a great story - you have a great writing style, and the plot was well developed and really kept me interested throughout. The sex was very hot. Keep writing - we all want more!
I was thrilled to check back and see you'd done #6 and hope you'll return for #7. Love this story. Thank you.
Absolutely the best story I've ever read on Literotica. I fell in love with Danni while reading this story. Great job. I sure hope there's more to come.
I actually have a cute neighbor girl of my own who calls me Babycakes.
Keep on writing, light hearted, sexy, well developed stories. You are one of the best here on Literotica.
I should know, I probably read them all,.... ;)
the ending was so abrupt, as if you suddenly just decided you wanted to end it
This story really hit home as i have had that relationship but so far without your ending and their sisters...keep up the good writing
Is this the last entry in the story? There are still issues that are unresolved. Will Becca be cool with the breakup and them going behind her back? How are they going to be both co-workers and lovers?
I'm going to guess that was a real situation. I can certainly identify with it if it is. I've felt like Phil for a long time. Thanks for the story. My Dani is a girl named Jolene. There are several stories about her under my pen name. Hope you will read them. Good luck and keep writing.
Hope the story could of continued. Maybe a where are they now type of sequal if you ever post again on this site.
they are well written and and a similar thing happened to me. In so much as having found love lost it only to have it work out much latter.
Maybe it’s me but IF she has a rule about dating work colleagues which prevents them having an affair, how come she shags the in house IT guy? The one that sorted her spreadsheet problem and a work colleague? Shome Mishtake Shirley??
I loved everyone of the chapters. I hope you write more! Well written, great variety of content. Enjoyed the romantic relationship evolution as much as the sex scenes. Very well done!