All Comments on 'Coach'

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HistoricalpassionHistoricalpassionabout 12 years ago
It

felt a bit rushed. But a good story none the less :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

oh yeahhhhhh i wish i had a life like jun's and yes i was hoping for foreplay ;D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

so is it going to keep going since there is no the end yet

cute story lolz

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Plz! Write another chapter. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
XD

Omg I love this story so much!!! I imagined the whole thing as if I was Jun and I swear I could feel what he was feeling. I remember my first time, which was rough and left me in pain, but a pain that I wanted to feel over and over again lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
OMG

OMG...this made me think of the history teacher I have a HUGE crush on...loved it!

Zack12345Zack12345almost 11 years ago
the best story i have ever read

I read some good story but none of them was as good as this one love it you should make it in to a movie I will buy it

madox664madox664almost 11 years ago
wo

Dam amazing work with the dominance ,please continue your works.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
something is missing

Where did the condom go?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
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they ate them

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