All Comments on 'Coach T... Ch. 01'

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TonyTheTiger88TonyTheTiger88about 18 years ago
Hoping For More

I hope there's more to come of this story series. I'm anxious to find out where you're going to take it.

CeliaSpringfieldCeliaSpringfieldover 15 years ago
Very good

This was an excellent story. It contained just the right amount of spice to really drive home the fantasy of a student being taken by her coach. It was sexy without being overdone, the descriptions were good, the spelling and punctuation great. I look forward to reading more!

peebudypeebudyalmost 13 years ago
more please!

can't wait for chapter 2!

evonnaevonnaover 5 years ago
ooh.. hot...

... i liked the "beautiful when angry... begging to be taken... wanted to fuck you right there" comment..... nice...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Maybe you should include an age because it gotten a little too weird for me to enjoy, skimmed a little to close to Pedophilia

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