All Comments on 'Coach's Favorite'

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CHL88CHL88over 7 years ago
Not sure...

This is a good story, but I have a couple of comments.

Not sure what country this is occurring in (Americans don't generally refer to "university," they call it "college," and a 19-year-old high schooler who was not held back is very uncommon. If this is occurring in the U.S., then it isn't just "wrong," but it's illegal, regardless of her age, because he's a high school teacher in a position of authority over her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
"erotic"

Apology, but I find this a bit normal type of coupling. I mean it's normal in the way the sexual act is described. There's nothing "erotic" about it. The way the story is described is very good, but in my opinion, it should not be categorised as "erotic." When erotism is concerned, there's something more than what we normally know; some sexier actions that make the coupling more exhilarating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story

I think this is a FANTASTIC story. Well written, naughty, and perfectly realistic. Please consider making this a series, or writing more stories!

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