All Comments on 'Coastal Ch. 02: Into the Abyss'

Astoundingly good can't wait for more

Perfect! This are the gems i am looking for on Literotica. Can´t white for the next chapter.

Curiosity is driving me crazy. Upload it soon

Please finish the story. It is fantastic and very well written.

This is a level above what may be classed as normal here. There is significant originality and excellent development of all the characters. I know what writer's block is and if I can help - just ask.

Looking forward to reading more.

Stilted, pompous, arrogant. Well deserved "1*" !

This was such a good premise, I don't understand why you never finished it. Will you ever do so?

Since someone asked: life got in the way. Work is intense, and my chronically ill wife is getting worse every year so I just couldn't get my head around that story again. Actually a good part of it is already written, as well as the epilogue and I plan to find an editor who can also advice me on wether it got over the top too much in between.

With a bit of luck my advancing vacation will get me relaxed enough again to continue.

But not near as good as the 1st part. :(

Humiliation and debasement are contrasted with the arrogant thrill seekers that first arrived at the erotic hotel. Releasing their inner submissive enslavement. Dark fantasy versus the raw coastal surf and light of reality.