All Comments on 'Cobra Crew: Freeing Escobar Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I know this is an older completed story...

...that is fantastic. The eroticism blended into an downright interesting story on its own merits is very entertaining. However the lieutenant being the sixth out of six females in her twenties, four of which are late twenties, was a rare head scratcher that knocks one out of an otherwise incredible narrative. For variety and world building it would have made more sense for her to be in her thirties. Even the ATF interrogator probably should have been in her thirties. At least early thirties, only a couple years older. They still would have been hot, keeping in shape for their testosterone heavy careers. To get to those positions would likely take a decade at least.

Otherwise an awesome story, 5 stars

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