All Comments on 'Cock for Penny'

Very sexy, but I wish it was longer and a little more developed. Dialog was a bit unrealistic sounding.

The lucky fucker, two redhot cunts to suck and fuck. I spend one night a week with two girls and one night with three. would love to do a mother and daughter though, so fucking sucking hot hot hot. more and more like this and soon please, like yesterday.

Title speaks for it self.

Guy caught jerking off, lesbian daughter can't resist (yeah, right) and then mom joins the action.

Truly a dull and unimaginative story.

Got to bring that sweet little girl back on our side or a least half way. Bi is better than totally lesbian

Sorry but this was boring, very predictable and very badly written.

This isn't a story. It's an outline for a story. A story needs details, background, a hook, and has to take its time to get there.

More! Ended way too soon

Love the idea of fucking mother and daughter!!

Firstly, if you hope to have your reader enjoy what you wrote you know to write you grammar correctly! If a person has to stop to wonder what you just wrote, that the enjoyment is gone. Second, if you haven't done the sexual act I serious doubt you can describe it! As the saying goes: "write what you know," If it isn't physically possible then the reader won't be able to imagine ti, and so the pleasure is gone, Finally if a character is truly a lesbian then there needs to be more coaxing to perform a heterosexual act., otherwise the male character is going to have to rape her. Again this goes back to writing what you know.