by Creamer
However I am sure that the creeps among you will love it
But the writing was fine. Better than most. Well within professional levels. And if you don't like this sort of thing, go back to the "Romantic" categories and leave us in peace.
So glad you've kept up writing this story. Looking forward to the rest.
I'm not as much of a fan of this story as I am of Bean Counter, but it's been very entertaining. Keep up the good work.
Love the writing! And you handle the concept very well too. More...gimme more!
How do they get to chapt. 14. 9 months later and now he says the writing is terrible...a little advice just stop reading when you discover that you dont like the story...there should be a no MORON policy on this site