All Comments on 'Cockatoo Pt. 14'

more than 1 page chapters please ty

James better get down on his knees and beg for Alex's forgiveness but in saying that I can't wait to see how James' meeting with Kritsada is going to go. That could go some very interesting ways!

Thankyou for the update ... I personally don't care if the update is 1 or 2 or 3 pages long I'm just grateful you are sharing your writing talent and this work with us!

You are really dragging this out, it's now getting boring, just end the story and put all of us out of our misery. It started out good but now is just a drawn out piece of shit story that is going no where.

Keep going Nikkiesilk, the high ratings show the real appreciation from your audience. Don't get distracted by these English-Teacher-Wanna-Be's

Your brief story has taken on a life of its own. Excellent

This one had less than 3000. I think the readers, with the exception of 3 or 4, are telling you to wrap this up. It's gone on way too long.