All Comments on 'Cockatoo Pt. 23'

Cant wait for chapter 24. This going to be good. Keep up the good work.

I hope there are many more chapters to come. I love the story and the charters.

This continues to be one of my all-time favorite series on here. I love that we finally got a Pao centered chapter. She's become my favorite character. And the hint at the end for what's coming next is intriguing.

Enough said.

I was waiting for this chapter and it certainly didn't disappoint..

I'd like to be Pao's next bonus. Lol.

Looking forward to getting to know Nin better (hopefully much better..)

Keep up the great work!

this story gets better and better Nikki I just love how you have developed

this with links coming in from previous chapters looking for the next chapter

when you are ready to post.

Love the diversions you take with time to refresh cockatoo by writing different Stories

SamanthaAnne

Such a great story please keep the chapters coming sooner rather than later!!!