by briacon429
absolutely amazing. you tell the story very well. both characters seem very attractive and attracted to one another. anxiously awaiting the next part!
Welcome, most new writers don't get five stars as easily as the five I just gave you. I looked at your bio, and this is only your 2nd submission. I look forward to more - Great work, I suspect your name may be Brian?
I'm Doug, and I think your writing is awesome.
I’m glad you like it— thanks! Yeah, Brian isn’t my real name, but my pen name anyway...
I like that explored gay sex. So awesome. I felt like them from time to time. Good writing.
You're two for two. This was fucking hot. I loved how he begged to have his mancunt bred (and that you called it that; so hot) while he got the cum fucked out of him.
Great story. I love reading about straight guys exploring their sexuality, especially when a writer takes his time to let them explore. More please!
Thanks Markbike!
If you lioe these first two chapters, then you’re in luck... because there’s lots more to cum. I hope you like the others too!