by JustJulieW
Who was he? What was the relationship? This is the only criticism I have to make of this story. Liked it. Write some more, please.
I think who he is doesn't really matter. Not knowing is what makes the story good.
I loved it! I guessed and had the end figured out but still loved it! Would love to experience this myself! Keep them cumin and I will be UP for many more!
I don't like these teasers that look like the contents have been pre-planned.
Cleverly conceived, well-written, and nicely paced. Looking forward to more of your work!