All Comments on 'Cocktail Hour'

by JustJulieW

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skip.69skip.69over 19 years ago
Who?

Who was he? What was the relationship? This is the only criticism I have to make of this story. Liked it. Write some more, please.

Uncle South LoopUncle South Loopover 19 years ago
I srongly disagree with "Who" comment

I think who he is doesn't really matter. Not knowing is what makes the story good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Love During The CockTail Hour!

I loved it! I guessed and had the end figured out but still loved it! Would love to experience this myself! Keep them cumin and I will be UP for many more!

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
A Bad Tease....

I don't like these teasers that look like the contents have been pre-planned.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
A rising new star here!

Cleverly conceived, well-written, and nicely paced. Looking forward to more of your work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
very hot

very nice, very erotic. looking forward to more submissions.

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