All Comments on 'Codie's Rough Year Ch. 03'

With a editor to review your work it would be better. Missed capitalization etc. Here is an example:

Old: In an attempt not to wake anyone up i snuck quietly into the house and up stairs to my bedroom.

New: In an attempt to not wake anyone I entered the house quietly and went upstairs to my bedroom.

(Upstairs is one word unless it is used as follows: I went up the stairs...)

Love this chapter the MOST!

And quite alright if you have 'daddy issues'..In fact,there's nothing that compares with a father and daughter enjoying themselves..

So Please continue with more of this delicious coupling ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

P.S. you're little profile pic is great,you look like a movie star with those shades on😎

Very beautiful!