by barefootcowgirl
This very hot and sexy couple have an amazing adventure in front of them. Please keep going with this story. Maybe there are some babies in the future and a life of happy ever after.
The small breasts were such a turn on! And having them a little older instead of the barely 18 or 19 was good too! Loved it!
You posted an incest story..And hopefully they'll be more on the horizon?
The only thing that would've been better if it was read by the female pov and if it was the other way around,meaning older sister/younger brothers personal fav)
Nonetheless,very very good story! It did its job and gave me an intense cum,lol,my dick and I thank you for that as well as ALL those wonderful pics of your breasts😍
VERY SEXY!
As I see that this is your first foray into the taboo/incest category, I think it is a wonderful short story. I like the exhibitionist aspect of the "little" sister as a nice teaser. I hope you write a lot more in this category as you seem to have a penchant for it.
He should have just pushed is cock in as deep as it would go and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy
This is story land no VD or babies
I really enjoyed that. Well written with good action and believable characters.
I wrote this for a fan, and while I know you appreciate cumming inside a woman (I think you have commented before on that), some guys like their spoo on the outside of their women. I think they like the mess and the Dom/sub-ness of it, and I knew my fan would appreciate it on her skin.
I promise my next story will include cumming in the girl-just for you! (Most of my stories do, you know.) I like a little variety in my sex as well as my stories. Thanks for continuing to read and comment.
generally i liked the story. it was a little short - the beginning tease could have been longer and better done. i gave it 5 stars. i think you could add a chapter 2 - on how they move forward. i liked the sex scenes - and thats what counts!!!
How tall was Daisy? She was always climbing off or up the chair. Daisy must've been about 2 feet tall.
I appreciate good effort, decent grammar, and a cohesive story.
Thanks very much.
its very short but so hot story they should be marry and produce childrens
Must be getting pretty funky on the ground by his balcony. The neighbours obviously don't mind.
Some men are Assholes
They take advantage of a beautiful and loving woman.
Making her work in a topless bar was degrading.
What a beautiful ending.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
I loved your story, but peeing off the deck? Not since back in the 50's.
I like the realism of the situation- where it actually seems reasonable that she would confide in the closeness and trust she instills by him being her brother. And for the other commenter- what male doesn't pee outside...nothing better. LOL This could evolve into a great multi chapter story.
I especially like the flow of the story. The length of the story makes far less difference than its development. This story hit all the notes along the way. The teasing, the backstories (his and hers), the romance all contribute to make this one of the best stories I've read. Thanks.
Very good story. Realistic and to the point. Very natural build up. Good start to describe the brother's character. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Keep up the good work.
I want to hear more about these two, you do some great short stories, but I'd like to have more. A continuation of a story. You write so well that I just want to keep reading about the characters and their lives. Please keep writing!!!
This is a great story!!! It is well written, very erotic. It was written so well that it just seemed so natural for brother and sister to become lovers. Especially since as siblings, there was already the love for each other. Excellent reading.
She goes off and fucks thier cousin Jeff and doesn't care if she is pregnant with cody's or Jeff's baby and also agrees to fuck him again next time Jeff comes by for "coffee" when Cody isn't around. the writer turns daisy into a worthless whore. Don't bother reading this or the other chapter. Garbage