All Comments on 'Coerced and Loving It Ch. 01'

Thanks Author - reality seems to be on the way - nice work and talented writting.

the protagonist does not react as i expect, but folks are different.

still one would expect a human to go thru the 5 stages of mourning/grief when a marraige dies: denial, anger, barganing, depression and acceptance. this guy has jumped straight to depression, it seems.

This next chapter if you write should be great and I don't want to miss it. This was a great start.

but don't wimp him out in subsequent chapters.

I liked how you show the husband trying to find a justification for his wife of over 20 years acting like she does. Seems like a very reasonable response when when confronted with such a shocking discovery. I hope you dont have him bury his head in the sand with respect to the wife though.

She behaves like a whore for 2 years, wont tell him there is anything wrong and gets mad when he suggests getting help for their marriage. Not much could justify her behaviour over such a long period of time (including blackmail etc) while allowing the husband to believe she still loved him IMO.

Hopefully you have some kind of great twist in chapter 2 that will justify giving her a 2nd chance. If not, I hope the husband can see who really hurt him after he gets even with her coworkers.

Joe_Avg

The start of a great story, I can't wait for the other chapters. Please don't make him a wimp, Its one thing for a wife to have problems with sex, its another for her to cheat on her husband. she could have told him she was having problems at work if she was. She sound like she just dosn't like sex with the hubby so its time for revenge on everyone and him to move on

The start of a great story, I can't wait for the other chapters. Please don't make him a wimp, Its one thing for a wife to have problems with sex, its another for her to cheat on her husband. she could have told him she was having problems at work if she was. She sound like she just dosn't like sex with the hubby so its time for revenge on everyone and him to move on

I wonder what this all is about, but I bet she LOVES the gang bangs.

Will wait for next chapter.

Cheers!

great start! i look forward to chapter2

now become rich off the companys indiscretion and get ridof the slut of a wife you have .. would be different if you could have done all them things but to let many men do what you have never been able to do ...id nail her ass to the wall along with every body elses... if they offered me a cpl of million to not take it public i probably would ... as long a my wife divorced me and didnt claim any and signed off on any cliaim to our property ...my conditions ... and i would go now and get the best prostitute i could find and charge it to gradys charge card ...this is not a marriage

all that abuse and neglect going on for months before he found out about it... what EXACTLY does he hope to gain by finding out the REASONS?

She is sucking cock of her wedding anniversary

His wife is a whore and doesnt gIve a shit if he lives or dies...

the only viable option here is for this whimp to blow this cow's fucking head clean off and murder the managers

This guy has guts to know what he wants to do to find out about his wife, before he takes action. He works as though he was a private investigator, before he makes his move. I love his tact and the action he is working on.

Hope this is the first of many chapters as he gets his revenge and makes DD his whore.

Which man in that world would react as your protagonist? It's unbelievable that he don't confront her and the chums immediately!!! She is a slut intending or not and has to be divorced!! And all the others get sued!!! Maybe that you are a fan of cuckolding/wimp??!!