All Comments on 'Coercion Pt. 01'

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EzrollinEzrollinalmost 7 years ago
I think I'm going to like this...

Nice start with a good flow...Am I right assuming you're English, the style seems to indicate you are. Looking forward to your next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Seems like she's incredibly dumb

She's setting herself up for failure. Why would she do that?

1 star

liz33ndliz33ndover 4 years ago
i thought it was hot

the writing style is a bit different, but worthy of four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Expecting next parts from very long time.. please share further story..

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