All Comments on 'Coffe House Pick Up Part 03'

cant wait to read the next chapter.

is the best so far but i"m expecting the next one to be even better.

I love how they story has pain and guilt in it and the mom has some doubts. It has a very real feel to it.

Please have the mom wear the bodystocking again.

You have no detailed sex scenes and you need a editor your writing of this story also seems forced like you really didn't wanna write it and it's the same in every chapter it seems so unrealistic it's not funny for example on how to write a decent mom and son fantasy story read any mom and son story from lovecraft68 he is 1 of the best writers on here you could learn a lot from him just by reading his stories then adding your own flare to yours after learning how to write it to where it doesn't seem forced