All Comments on 'Coffee Tryst'

This is an unedited and unfinished version of “Coffee Tryst.” Please give the story 48 hours for the edited version to be affixed before reading. Thank you!

Unedited? You could have fooled me! Sorry. I read it before I saw your end comment. Thoroughly enjoyed it!! I’ll check it out again when you repost. In my humble opinion, it can’t get much better. Unless it was longer with even more love and romance! 💕💘

Is this a one off or will there be a chapter two. It's good as it is though. Just hoping for more.

This is a one off story, yeah. I can’t make any promises about a continuation.

I really enjoyed this story, thank you for sharing it with us!

Well 5 stars anyway. When u say unfinished I wouldn't mind reading more. Great story, loved it.

Please don’t end here. Beautiful story that deserved 5 stars plus. Hopefully you will be able to continue the adventure.

It seems the edited version won't be up for awhile. I'm not sure why the pending process is taking so long, but unfortunately, this version will remain here until then. I was really hoping to get feedback and a genuine rating on the full story, but that doesn't seem like that'll happen soon. In any case, thank you so much for the comments and I appreciate the critiques.

I've read all your stories. The sweetest girl-girl stories on literotica in my opinion, and this one was the best one yet. Loved it!!!

I have just joined this site, what do you mean by unedited?

I thought this story was just beautiful and sweet, very close to my heart, but that’s another story.

This is the first story I have read on the site, it sure is so well written. I will have to read all your stories, I bet they are all awesome.

Katie.

By unedited I mean the story hasn’t undergone any last-check revisions so there are still some errors in the writing. It’s also incomplete and missing some parts. Thank you for your comment nonetheless and I hope you enjoy the rest of my stories too.

Though you said that this is a one off story... i do hope you reconsider. You can still do alot on this one... we hope that you'll take the time to write a sequel.

Don`t get me wrong, as a stand alone tale its great, but a second part would turn it into the "fabulous" category.

What happens when their parents and family are told etc.

With the backstory firmly and very perfectly established there is great potential for further exploration, but if you decide not to then thank you for an interesting and erotic tale :)

I'd love to see you write more. Your stories are very engaging and sweet. Keep up the good work! 🙂

"After all, everyone knows that the first to fall in love loses."

Damn you, for writing that. No, not everyone knows that, people like me don't know that. And that's me, almost every fucking time, I ruin it by falling in love first, and the woman I love gets scared off cause I need her too much too soon.

I feel so bad for these two girls, they almost lost each other. Did they really save their love? God, I hope so. I'm still not sure, after reading the last page again.

My God, you're a hell of a writer. Please don't beat me up so bad with your next story. I'll read everything you write, I swear.

Damn the suspense and emotional turmoil this was great. Can just picture the scene when Sofia hears about what Lillian said to that tool. This story honestly could go on forever but I feel the cut off was chosen well leaving the reader to actually do some work and I have a vivid imagination.

Lovely idea, great action, vividly described sex. The style is weird and weak, but the inspiration of the story makes up for that.

Did i missed it or "ilove you too " wasn't spoken from lillian or? Anyway yeah misunderstandings or wrong communications or what happen if i ..... Love is just so sensibel and so extraordinary beautiful, you made it happen here in this story and hopefully it will last

💝💝💝💝💖💖💖💖💖💖

A nice story!

Seemed to take a turn with the friends with benefits part, didn't really fit the rest of the vibe of the story!

But still a good story.