All Comments on 'Cold Outside'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very sexy story

This was s very sexy story, and reminded me a lot of my first time. The only problem I saw was the word "womb," I think its just too heavy with baggage for such a sweet seductive scene. Great work though overall and great cock descriptions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice, but need the payoff

A nice, sensual story. However, it would have been all the better if there was some mention or hint of Darci becoming pregnant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent

Excellent story, thank you. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Very good. Feels like it needs a bit more but loved it regardless

beanburner69beanburner69over 4 years ago
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suppose to be about impregnation

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