All Comments on 'Cold Reception'

know you're working within the Lit parameters, but this is just so well done...so fucking hot!

So well written and the suspence was great and a good ending

I really enjoy your stories.

Having said that, I think this one could have been even better had Erin been forced to give Todd head while the intruders took her from behind as she did, and if one of Todd or Erin somehow been in league with the intruders, perhaps even Erin being the sister of Adam or Jeff.

Just a thought, but nicely done.

Hot story, more please!

I had my fist in my dripping cunt by the end and came two times. I would love this to happen to me and my husband