All Comments on 'Cold Steele - and Mrs. Robinson Ch. 03'

Nice to see the reference to Tully. You have so many good characters I forget their names.

Thanks for sharing.

And the tale continues. Looking forward to the next chapter.

if one know where to look and how to look. TK U MLJ LV NV

Watch out for tricky writers who take a fiendish delight in plot twists...

If I was an enemy of Mr. Robinson? Or the next heir in line to inherit from the estates of either of the murdered? And I wanted to get him into a shit load of trouble? I would be using his name in vain to arrange those murders and set up the hired killer to get himself killed to remove him as a possible witness that could recognize the real instigator.

I'm just saying, it sounds easy to get a "Conviction Beyond a Reasonable Doubt". That is the function of the "Innocence Project", to try to free possibly innocent victims of assumption and prejudice, Legal Defense Incompetency and Police/Prosecutor/Judicial Misconduct.

Your Westerns are showing. You know that all this amounts to hearsay and probably the witnesses won't be able to sing....

And one misses and the other never gets off a shot? This isn't the wild, wild west, it's Sci/fi that's moving at a snail's pace. UGH!

I normally don't respond to comments on or about my stories but I will yours.

Sorry to stretch your ability to believe in a possible reality by so much. My character, Jasper, was a little shaken to have a Glock pointed at his head and was unable to hit a moving target. I guess he's not a tough as you.

And I'm sorry you feel the story is moving slowly. If you would show your Lit member name, I would like to read some of your work so you can teach how to write a fast moving story.

Failing that please send you address so I can refund the money you've spent on my work.

Finally, I invite you to exercise the ultimate form of editing and censorship, namely stop reading now and don't read more of my work.

Woodmanone

In the first story in this series it was mentioned that Abby's father had died. Now he's alive. If the author ever reads this comment I think he should consider going back and changing that in the first story. Perhaps he could change it to grandfather?

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

and the humanity of the players. I am also enjoying the simplicity of the plot.

Thanks