All Comments on 'Collared Spice Pt. 01'

What a fascinating beginning. Unfortunately it's been four years since this first chapter was submitted, so unfortunately it's a dead end. Unless one of the other excellent writers on lit wants to pick up the story.

I hope this is but the first of many long episodes.

It was really good make more please I loved it and wish for more please don't forget about it

Can't wait to read chapter 2! :D Keep it coming!

Much potential, I sense in this, hm?

Love the style of writing, plot, and characters..looking forward to the next chapter.