All Comments on 'Collateral Ch. 04'

... This story is absolutely one of the best on this site. You are doing a masterful job of character development. 5* from me!

Whooosh

I like Jake getting feisty. And I think he needs to stand up to Klaus and stop being scared. But. Easier said than done

I like this story very much. It is not like so many others about high school boys. Not that I don't like stories about high school boys - a few have been some of my favorites. However, their prevalence in gay male erotica appears overdone, at least to me. Five stars from me.