All Comments on 'Collateral Ch. 12'

I love your stories so much. I am hooked, you give me the inspiration to continue writing my story though I won’t be nearly as good. I just felt the need to express how great of a writer you are to me

I am truly happy I stumbled across this story, you have a gift for story telling and I hope you continue to develop your talent. I want to encourage you to publish this as a book or as part of a collection of short stories. You ability to develop your characters and to build suspense is excellent. My only criticism is the chapters are too short, can hardly wait for what happens next.

I love Jake. And Klaus even tho he is kind of dick.

Great story.

-starry

Oh dear lord, these two! Jake has the perfect combination of innocence, curiousity, loyalty, intelligence and humbleness. No wonder he has taken over Klaus’ world. If I could wish a do over for my first time, it would be the way you described. I look forward to Klaus realizing just how deeply he has fallen for Jake. Great job on another terrific chapter.

So I've read all 12 chapters in one day and can honestly say I'm obsessed! I adore Klaus and Jake together. I cannot wait to read more! You're a very talented writer, there are a few grammatical errors but it's really not a big deal when you have such a fantastic story.

- Nina

I am really enjoying this story. The characters are great. Thanks for sharing

I don’t believe you are a “would be” writer! Very good writing! Love the story!

This is a outstanding story. You are doing great. Can believe I've never read this story. :)

I'm just happy to find an incredibly talented writer on Literotica I've been searching for MONTHS. Don't get me wrong I have come across some EXCELLENT writers but they are few and far between a lot of them have stopped writing haven't written anything in years. So you miss are a breath of fresh air. Again thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Loving everything about this story. Great writing. Can’t wait to see how Klaus and Jake end up.

This story is one of the best that I have read in a long time.It is about Love, committing to each other.

Thank you so much

This chapter left me with goosebumps. It wasn't the sex, it was the conversation about college. That and "...you already won."

There's are certain parts that make my eyes water

You are a very good writer. I love your characters. Thank you!