All Comments on 'College Clones Ch. 10: Finale'

The story turned quite dark, and the characters with the possible exception of Tricia are nasty enough that setting them loose with their capabilities is more like erotic horror than anything else.

Not too often I come for a wank and get so caught up in the story and characters I gloss over the sex scenes for more story. You could easily make this a mainstream story by removing the graphic sex and overt fetishism from the mix. The grammar and spelling had some occasional flaws, but the characters felt solid. You took your time on fleshing them, and the science behind the fiction, out and it shows. Overall 5/5 on story and 4/5 on delivery.

Why on earth use ‘seen’ when it should be ‘saw’? Spoils an otherwise well written story.