by oneguy4fun
You wrote a lovely story to begin with, but now it is getting out of hand. First the three mistresses in Ch. 3 and now the Cruel Mistress in Ch. 4. Before long you will have him sucking cock, drinking other's cum and loving it.
You are a piece of work...
Ignore "anonymous in USA." Look at the votes, and revel in the fact that you've written a great series. :-)
An excellent tale of enslavement. Nicely paced and totally realistic. I could easily imagine myself in the main role and totally enjoying it.
you should continue ......atleast one more chapter ............its great !!!
If you even believe this junk for a second, where he would have been is gone, long gone. What a bitch.
You are a gifted writer and I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it here. I am off to read more of your work!
This silly little tale is so implausible and unbelievable that I'm still laughing. You picked the wrong age group. College guys are so jacked up with pride, ego and testosterone that her thought that she could demean, degrade and humiliate one is a joke. He would have punched her in the mouth the first time she tried and moved onto the thousands of available women that are in school with him. And the q-tip trick? That would have be extremely painful, not to mention possibly causing him permanent damage so no way that happens. And the cage? You idiots really need to get off those things. An idiot cuts it off in under 30 seconds with a simple tool. All in all this is one of the poorest stories I've read.
You graduate and leave them behind. He's had his college experience. Drop the bitch and move on.