All Comments on 'College Dom - Professor Sub Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Maybe a good editor would help?

The style in which you wrote this was off-putting. Simply no fun to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing

Thought it was great.. wow. Can't wait for th next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So fun!

A great story! Can't wait to see where it goes! (I have to agree it could use a bit of editing, but it didn't take too much away from the story for me!) Got me hot! ;)

Jack506Jack506over 2 years ago

Good story. Would be five stars except for the lack of proofreading.

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