All Comments on 'College Fund Ch. 02'

by bjmichaels

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I'm loving the series so far. You're great at building suspense and your varying choice of words keeps the sex scenes fresh. You're building a great context for a coming of age story and while there's a lot of domination going on, your main character remains an independent person that shows a sort of shy and at times guilty enjoyment of having his boundaries pushed. That is really hot to me.

It's hard to find a story that involves dominance play that doesn't reduce the sub to a slab of meat, and many of the stories that do build an amazing character are lacking the excitement of your story in the sex scenes. I like that you know how to mix a good storyline with plenty of hot fucks. Please keep going ;)

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 7 years ago
Wonder story

Very well written and erotic to read Had me excited and hard.

arnoldradarnoldradalmost 4 years ago
This is a hot series!

This is a hot series!

HotAss4UHotAss4U7 months ago

OMG. So HOTT !!! I love it

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