All Comments on 'College Girl Altruism'

This was well-written. The background, the emotions, and the story were developed. The pace was great and the length was perfect. You concluded it well. 5*

I don't know why, but when he goes into her room and she puts the blindfold on, I can see her laid out before me, the sun is blazing through the window and she feels so real I can almost taste her. Thanksalot!!