All Comments on 'College Life'

I thought it was really well written!!!

Content and build-up were good. Nice Effort.

story was reviewed in the author's hangout story review thread.

Please, i think me and most everybody else would like another chapter.

To really let the romance side come out. So far it was only from his POV, I'd like to see how she comes to love him

Hello,

Thanks for the feedback guys, and I may indeed do a second part, from her PoV...

Mr. Illusion

MUST

WRITE

MORE

But I have a hard time believing two people together for the very first time are already talking about sex with others especially if they are newly fallen in love. That killed this story for me. That to me is not romance at all.

Well-written, sensual, and incredibly sexy. A great story, written realistically with building passion, and culminating in a beautiful ending.

Thank you for your work, and for sharing it with us!

The build of your stories is exceptional. Your devotion to detail and the way you allow it all to unfold. Simply fantastic, love to see a sequel with Gina involved

Excellent. Great description. So good that I could clearly visualize Milla's great body and the passionate lovemaking. But why did you have to ruin it by ending it with anal?

Loved the story. Maybe a sequel might involve Marion... and maybe they could find her a guy, or girl. Maybe Gina could come along for the ride.

Erotic, well written !!

This is possibly the hottest thing I have read here.

Good story, BUT you have to know Johnny Walker is a blended scotch not a single malt! For a true Scotch drinker that was an egregious error and had to cost points. Ok Johnny Walker Blue is still a very fine scotch, but still it isn’t MacCallan

One of the hottest stories ever! Would love to see this continued one day!

Not romance

Well written, romantic and erotic. When will publish a follow up story?