All Comments on 'College Life'

This story has GREAT potential! He's on the floor, having cum from sucking off his bud! Truly GAY at his core! Does his Bud reciprocate OR see the potential of creating a sub to meet HIS needs???

5 Stars. Very nice indeed. Hope to have them change places in the morning. Move on to other things later. Please continue this as I see lots of places this could go.

Gorgeous.

Xxx

Chris

I think we're all waiting for Jake to blow the author. And for the fuller description, give Jake (who seems a bit more mature?) a bit of hair for that gorgeous chest.

Hot hot hot !!! Please continue and have them flip flop as well as go on to other areas. Nice!

I can see this as many guys story

Great story; don't like comment roommate a loser; have author go home ( his dorm room)- find roommate bare assed -coming from or going to shower- and get turned on, then they have sex; then add more guys (and girls) -- maybe Jake's sister; roommate's sister, etc

Perfectly good storyline but I found it a bit jerky to read - it doesn't flow very smoothly. It tends to come out in short bursts.....

Try to expand your sentences so they roll past your eyes more like a conversation might - try using some 'ands' to link brief sentences.

Not that I'm an expert!! :)

I knew a bouncer at a popular club. His goal was UFC and he was trying hard.

One night i was at the wrong time at the wrong place and a group of ex cons cornered me in an after-hour bar to force me to suck their dicks. At that moment the bouncer shows up with his colleagues. I was saved by the bell.

The bouncer & I ended that night at his place & started talking. He showed me some karate, some ju-jitsu & some olympic wrestling.

As a pretend joke, he grabbed me and in a single move pulled down my jeans and plase me in the OTK spanking position. "Do you know what i will do next?" he asked me while gently stroking my ass & the back of my thighs.

We negotiated for a bit while i was held in the same position. We both laughed. By then his index finger was up my ass.

"You are in the cherry territory there, man, please be gentle... and please do not tell anybody."

I was afraid of him at first, so much so that the muscle inside my ass was pulsating. My dick was only half erect and half hard but my balls were pull inside. I was breathing fast, my heart was ponding. I was aroused. I started kissing any part of his body i could get hold of. Less than a minute later, I was on my back, he was on top of me, my knees were around his rib cage, my hands were firmly hugging him around his neck and my lips were kissing whatever was in front of them at the moment. The tip of his dick was touching my ass cheeks and every now & then it would touch my anus sending an electric jolt throughout my body...

He popped my cherry that night.

All night i was pressing my body and/or my lips against his body. Our phydical contact was making me comfortable & happy and was sexually gratifying.

I felt like a woman all night.

He fuck me 3 more times in the following 4 weeks but by the last time the magic was gone. Sex was OK but i no longer was in 7th Heaven in his embrace.

I love the rush too when a man cums like that.

I enjoy this kind of advenyure. Made me remember the many times I sucked my friends big dick in high school and college. We got drunk and past out many times with my head between his thighs....