All Comments on 'College Loser Ch. 05'

This isn't NC/R. You're not getting the right audience, and this isn't what people expect or want when they open an NC/R story. You would get a better reception if you properly categorized this story.

This story is so good! Can't wait for more!!

If he went to police Justin would be jailed so sorry this is utter crazy and move it to fetish as I'm reporting this

And idiot removes the cage, without the key, in less than a minute. It takes a simple tool found everywhere or a locksmith. Terrible story.

Whats makes anyone thing 10 guys would want their cocks sucked off, among other things this story is just plain stupid and amateurish.unless the hero gets his ass in a sling there is no completion and the storyline is stupid. Its not realistic for anyone to put up with this shit (sucking cock,licking ass,drinking puss etc) simply because of a few pictures in pantys. These stories shold be screened

absurd cuck shit.

as usual to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. This old ugly fat lonely fag reads everyone of these stories and then votes 1. He is really the SOB on here who drives all the writers away!!

I think the premise had potential. However, what would work far better is if it were written in a way that the ex girlfriend sensed a submissive side in the protagonist, teamed up with her lover (Justin), and both "forced" Christopher to discover his submissive side which absolutely enjoys being in long-term chastity and be a slave for both Justin and the girls.

It could even be written in a way that Christopher became her boyfriend back then because, well, "that's what people do", and was scared and/or unaware of his submissive side. Which is actually what happens in real life often - many guys suppress their submissive side because they think it will make them spineless wimps, or because they are supposed to have "normal" relationships etc.

This is certainly getting more and more sadistic! I can't say I'm really into the shit-eating part, but I do plan to continue reading, since I still really like the idea of total submission to a roommate. :)

I was enjoying this story until the gay stuff. Not into that.

Please continue!!

Started off great. Then went downhill fast.