by shecheats
You did not even mention him. We want to hear you thoughts about him as you entertain other men. This professor could have been single and had group sex. LW is about the relationship more than just plain sex.
She is mentally disturbed, no way would this not get out, we are expected to believe she doesn't really work for Mc Donalds and sports a 80 I.Q. Stupid story and not erotic, just slutty.
Telling me what the characters said is not as interesting as having the characters say it themselves. What novel did you read where there was no quoted dialog?
The story line is interesting and the characters are better developed than many here on the site. Small changes can have big results.