All Comments on 'College Pussy Ch. 01'

One mis-spelled word, over and over again, ruined an otherwise hot story.

Decent Plot, Light on character, many errors in grammar and spelling. Maybe get someone else to edit it before you publish. Also the guy was pretty selfish. I can not understand how the girl had much fun at all. Must've been pretty good weed. And how was the morning after for her? Regrets?

Pretty cheap of him to take home the beer. I dont blame his wife for getting out, or for contributing to that loveless part of the marriage. Seems like he had it coming.

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wham, bam, not even a 'thank you ma'am...', or lube for her pucker...?

this guy pretty low-life creepy...not inquiring if she was on the pill first REALLY bad...could have had an enraged dad looking for him

I did note some H's towards end of these...this sure wasn't one of them