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Anonymousover 14 years agoYOu need to decide whether or not
you want to write in the first or third person, and use spell check for crying out loud!
Anonymousover 14 years agoGood but REALLY needs an Editor.
This story could have been a nice read but the grammar mistakes, misspellings, and constan changing from 1st to 3rd person ruined it. Next time use an Editor.
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