All Comments on 'College Sex Diary Ch. 02'

I just read the first entry in this diary, and I hope the irony of this story was intended. Does this make the main character an anglophile?

I'll assume that it was and say that again the writing was good, but the dialogue was atrocious. You switch into the sex without really transitioning into it. She is going to leave than he tells her take off her clothes and suddenly she can't control herself, maybe it was the british accent.

I will say that you do a splendid job in writing the orgasm paragraph. Here's hoping that that bit blossoms into a great next entry.