All Comments on 'Combat Arena Ch. 02'

by LstDghter1

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cladescladesover 9 years ago

Really cool story. I'll be sad if it's another year and half before the third chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Really like the second part and hope it's not long before more. I'd like to see the main character getting stronger on her own, training and having to keep sharp, while the others really get railed, preferably by her taking direct revenge, or not helping them. You've set up a really good environment that gives you lots of scope for interesting characters and decisions. Thanks for posting.

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