by xxmarkedwithhishighdispleasure
This is a very well written story, with convincing characterisation and dialogue. Emotional as well as physical reactions are described, something many authors on this site overlook. An enjoyable read.
This seems to be such a beautiful love story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
I normally don't leave comments, but that's because I rarely finish a story on here. What can I say? I get bored easily and if the words on the page don't drag me in right away, I move on to something else. This however was extremely well written and kept me captivated through the entire chapter. There were a few parts that felt a tad bit rushed or could use a little rewording to make it more readable, but otherwise, it's a great read. I'm on to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!